The Weekend Writing Warriors is an awesome site that allows writers to share their 8 to 10 sentence excerpts, published or unpublished, to the blogosphere. If you’d like to join or would like to read wonderful talent, please visit the WeWriWa website on Sunday, 2/2: http://wewriwa.blogspot.com.
This week I’ll be sharing my urban legends WIP. A serial killer murders college students, one by one, based off famous urban legends.
Here’s my excerpt:
[Sweeney Todd] sighed and closed the door; he approached the bed then plopped down; he texted: Room 24.
I’ll be there shortly was the reply.
He kicked off his boots and made himself comfortable, looking up at the ceiling, lying down, his hands behind his head.
It didn’t take long for Savannah to come; she had knocked so soft that he had hardly noticed it; he opened the door and greeted her with a smile.
She grinned back, then caressed his cheek. “Hello.”
“Hello.”
He stepped back, so Savannah could enter the room; when she walked past him, he felt her butt in her skin tight dress; he didn’t even know why she carried herself that way; it’s not like she was an escort or prostitute. He knew her for fuck’s sake. She could wear baggy sweats, and he would still think she was beautiful.
“Did anyone follow you?” he asked.
***Sorry if I didn’t comment on someone’s post last week. For some reason, Blogger wasn’t letting me respond to any blogs. I had tried on my iPhone and computer. It would let me write something but it wouldn’t let me hit submit.
Keep smiling,
Yawatta Hosby