#IWSG Blog Hop–Reworking an Old Story


It’s that time again. IWSG hosts a blog hop the first Wednesday of every month. Writers get to discuss their doubts and fears they’ve conquered, their struggles and triumphs. Even though writing is a lonely activity, it doesn’t mean you can’t surround yourself with people who understand what you’re going through.

Showing vulnerability makes you strong. If you’d like to read more from bloggers who shared their personal experiences, then please click here.

March’s question–Have you ever pulled out a really old story and reworked it? Did it work out?

I believe in Stephen King’s advice of giving yourself permission to write a shitty first draft. I’m talking NaNo where chunks of unusable stuff is added just for word count. I’m talking every scene having ten billion characters in each one, trying to get my full attention. I’m talking the beginnings starting way too early, yet the endings stopping too abruptly.

Let’s just say, my first drafts are a hot mess…

I’ve pulled out really old stories to rework them. Case in point–I published Something’s Amiss in 2014. I had written the first draft back in 2011! I remember because I was working on it when I was teaching creative writing through the ACE (Adult Community Education) Program. A friend had recommended Author House after using the company’s services. I googled them and decided to stay far away! Too many red flags…

So, not really knowing how I could publish my story, I kept it on my flash drive and moved on until years later. I opened up my poor, abandoned, dreadful story and patted myself for not publishing it back in 2011.

There was massive head hopping between Poe and Oliver, scene to scene. I had a bunch of boring scenes (according to the critique partners I had found). I thought I had written a romance, but the romance readers would’ve eaten me alive. Apparently, Oliver wasn’t manly enough, and Poe wasn’t likeable enough.

After getting feedback from two critique partners, I decided romance wasn’t a genre I was interested in writing. I had to do a massive rewrite on Something’s Amiss, deciding women’s fiction was my best bet. No more head hopping. No more boring scenes. Just a man who loves a woman while mourning the loss of his cousin.

After creating my second draft, I found a new critique partner. Someone who liked the genre I was pursuing. She was great. She even gave me tips on how to write sex scenes. If you ever read my book, pages 32-35 are pretty graphic haha.

It was a fun challenge, bringing my story to life. If I would’ve given up on it because it’d be too hard to revise, then that would’ve been my loss. Looking back, I’m happy I didn’t self-publish in 2011 because I still had a lot to learn. Back then, it was a foreign concept to get feedback, then improve my work in progress. I thought a story was complete after I wrote ‘the end.’ It wasn’t until I found Absolute Write Forums that I learned the proper process of writing and publishing. I researched for two years, publishing my debut novel, One By One, in 2013.

Thanks for listening. I don’t think I’ve ever shared that out loud…

Keep smiling,

Yawatta Hosby

9 thoughts on “#IWSG Blog Hop–Reworking an Old Story

  1. It worked out well for you to wait. This writing business is a constant learning curve, at least for me. I’ve learned a lot in the 3 years since I put out Fiendish and I’m still learning. Finding people and communities have been a god-send. LOL sex scenes, I still giggle my way through writing them.

  2. Ooh, good blog hop post. I can so relate. I’ve recently come to learn about the psychological phenomenon Impostor Syndrome, and I think it describes well how I feel when I contemplate reworking a story: I’m not the right person to do it properly, I won’t be good enough, my writing in the first place is too dull, etc… Sometimes I almost freeze up. Reworking a story is so daunting!

    • Hey Alexandrina,

      Reworking a story is definitely daunting! But, your writing isn’t dull. You’re a great writer. I liked your story I read for you!

      Imposter Syndrome, huh? I’ll Google it.

      Keep smiling,

    • Hi Deb,

      Oh man. Did you eventually end up revising it though later on, or did you trunk it?

      Haha I think a lot of authors know about the shitty first draft.

      Keep smiling,

  3. Romance can be quite restrictive. On top of the “rules,” there were also restrictions on subject matter. I couldn’t write books set in the arts or entertainment because “romance readers don’t like those.” Basically, they like stories about cowboys, billionaires, marriages of convenience, and pregnant women. I wanted to be traditionally published, so I had to play by those rules and those rules only. In children’s writing, you can write about the arts and no cowboys!!!

    • Hi Stephanie,

      Wow, I didn’t know romance readers didn’t like settings dealing with the arts or entertainment. I’ve been working on a love triangle between celebrities–good thing I’m calling it women’s fiction haha. It’s pretty cool that you write children’s books. Art rules 🙂

      Keep smiling,

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